Driving without Third Brake Light
Insensitive to others:
This WCR 9542 Pajero is either ignorant of the car’s third brake light condition, or aware of the situation but arrogantly drives around anyway. “Let’s see if others could guess if I am braking.”
If your third light malfunction – please fix it. The last thing you want is death from the car behind unable to break or slow down in time!
Aliya, 
Fadhli 3:26 pm on Sunday, November 15, 09 Permalink |
Did you snap this while driving at the same time? ;p
zzeed 3:41 pm on Sunday, November 15, 09 Permalink |
yes. but this was at a stopping velocity of zero (traffic jam). i made sure my right foot was firm on the brake before whipping out razr and taking a shot.
IHSAN 5:03 pm on Monday, November 16, 09 Permalink |
Salam Zid, the proofreader in me just resurfaced.
With regards to subject and predicate, please refer to the first sentence after ‘Insensitive to others:’
The subject, it seems, is the Pajero, and predicates indicate that the subject is either ignorant or aware, which are not adjectives one would use to describe a vehicle. I would like to suggest that you change the subject from the Pajero to the driver of the Pajero, to make the sentence more logical.
You may delete this comment once you have made the changes as suggested, or if you think that there is no need afterall for any changes to the sentence.
-Your compulsive spellchecker buddy-
zzeed 6:06 pm on Monday, November 16, 09 Permalink |
Dude… you’re doing more than just spell-checking! Hehe… If I wrote a book, you’d be among the first to proofread it ok?
That’s OK. I purposely “humanize” the vehicle. LOL.
I will keep the comment here, no worries.
Aliya 9:03 am on Tuesday, November 17, 09 Permalink |
If I write a book coz you haven’t written it yet. :p
zzeed 1:20 pm on Saturday, November 21, 09 Permalink |
subjunctive in counterfactual condition… i am never going to write a book, I think.